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In your twisted game
You want to tell me
That it is just you and me
But, look around and try to lie


You infact tell me
That it isn't how well I play
But, rather who is on my team
To bad you got first pick


We are playing for two endings
Neither will make both of us happy
One with a voiceless doll
The other with no strings at all


You know the rules
You made them and only let me know
How can you expect me to win
When I am bleeding and tired


How can I win a fight
Where cheating isn't below you
Pulling my team across your line
Holding the loaded gun to their head


You mess with my mind
Playing the cards
Telling me they made the choice
Then why do they look so pained


You haunt my dreams
With your words of 2 narrowing to one
Black and brown will become blonde
I already feel the new burning


There are ways to end your game
Your prize is on my side
With every roll of the die
She pulls further away


How could you win a game
When you don't even know
If you can walk away
With your prize


Her foolish actions
Only put her in danger
Your side unable to step in
You watch her stumble and fall


With your act
You can't stop her bleeding
Is you act, or her more important
You watch in wonder


She takes your hand
The one with the gun
Knocking her friend from your hold
Lining the barrel up with her heart


"Now pull...end this."
That smile, those eyes
She is sincere
She doen't want to play this game anymore


As she hears this click
She pull the knife
Together we will die
No one can say you won


You may have got first pick
I will get last strike
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Just one of the ones i wanted to upload...first in a while
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!Fallin2Pieces96 Jan 25, 2011  Student Writer
i LOVE this! <333 very good job! my favorite line was "One with a voiceless doll. The other with no strings at all"
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thank you so much...that was one of my favorites as well but there is so much about it i dont like
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~007Balel Jan 25, 2011  Student Writer
I really like the twist at the end.. "I will get last strike "
Even the part where she lines up the gun to her heart... I could almost picture that part.
There was a lot of emotions in this... and it really helped with the flow and the structure.
Great work.
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:iconsakura2349:
Thanks...I really like when one like this works out....
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~007Balel Jan 25, 2011  Student Writer
You're welcome :)
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