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You...and Me

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You tear apart my soul with every stare from your penetrating eyes...


You stop my heart with every kiss...


Your slowly killing me...but I don't want you to stop...


You make a fool out of me with every lie you tell...


You make me a slave with every command you give...


you make me feel like the most special person in the world with every minute you give...


You light up my dark world with every word you say...


With every embrace you chase my pain away...


You break me every time you pull away...


The only thing I do is make a liar out of you...


With every, "I love you."


I waste your time with every second you spend with me...


But you'll never know the worst thing you do to me...


So lean in close and let me whisper in your ear...


You make me love everything about you and me...
Meant for someone important to me but i never gave it them....So yeah
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Akiki20's avatar
this is fantastic. only one thing;; grammar. sorry, i'm one of those nit-picky people who slave over grammar and spelling. it's written very, very well. so much feeling. very deep packed into a few words. love it. just check the grammar or if you want me to, i'd be happy to help. (:
great job!